I'm in the vaguely confused situation wherein I am fairly certain I wrote a review (strong sense I attempted to spell the game the two main characters played, but had to double check the spelling), but do not see one here now, plus, I do not actually recall rating this story this highly. 5+ stars? Seriously? Shesh.
A man and a woman play a game. She's drunk. He's . . .it's not stated. They've been dating for a while. She's a teenager. He's creepily older than her. Like, 30+ year old dating a 18 year older creepy. I do not recall which game in particular they play, nor if she ever had success against him playing the game. But she's feeling recklessly overconfident, so agrees to a bet. He'll give her enough money to go to college if she wins; she'll wear a costume he picks out for her for a Halloween party (I forgot to include: 'he's filthy rich, she's cleanly poor (what, we doing opposites, yes? What's the opposite of filthy rich? Well, she doesn't have money, 'k?)'; is instant red flag if one side of a wager is some massively generous reward, and other side is something 'minor').
Woman, as expected, loses. All of this mentioned in passing, I don't think it was actually mentioned in detail though. Woman doesn't mind, really - she's going to be able to go to a Halloween party, which should be great, and all she has to do is wear whatever he picks out. How bad can it be?
Day of party occurs. She arrives early to get into the costume; she has no clue what he chose for her. She's the kind to be, apparently, constantly aroused. He keeps her on the peak of arousal as he provides her with the costume, and she puts it on. Talking her into doing certain things she might otherwise not do but for being so aroused. Like put on the costume sans undergarments (has the costume been used before? Has it at least been cleaned? Bare skin against rented costume? nooooo). She might be quite aroused, but she's still aware enough of her surroundings to notice that her nipples and breasts are kind of very visible in this costume. He makes some off hand comment about how he'll take care of things. She, being really horny, continues to put on costume. Assumes she'll put it on, they'll fuck, she'll then get him to add things - like . . . um, well, better cover for her breasts. I forget what all else.
While still on the peak of arousal, he binds up her arms, restrains her, and shoves a gag like thingie into her mouth. Then proceeds to lead her outside. She's, understandably, freaking out by this point.
Whereupon he leashes her to some post like thing outdoors. Then leaves. Vehicle arrives. She's horrified/embarrased/incredibly pissed off. People exit the vehicle. It's a horse . . . um . . . use my words . . . horse trailer thingie. The type of thing you transport horses in. The people from the vehicle, the front part at least, proceed to remove three women dressed like the main female character of the story. I failed to mention how she's dressed, yes? hmms. Right, so, she's been dressed up like a ponygirl (I also forgot to mention that he did actually tell her how he was going to dress her, I'd forgotten - so, forget what I said before about her not knowing -> she'd no clue what he meant, and was vaguely interested how she'd be dressed like a pony. Especially as there's just one of her, and most pony costumes she knew of previously involved someone wearing a horse head, and someone else wearing horse rear; that's not the kind of pony she's dressed up like).
One thing leads to another - and I interject two things: the woman is deeply annoyed/angry/etc. about everything going on; deeply aroused - and the exposed woman is attached to a two ponygirl cart. And proceeds to be forced to transport people longish distance from gate up to house. While being whipped.
Other stuff happens. Like a roommate appearing, and complications, and stuff. And people talking about her right in front of her, without actually talking to her. Etc.etc.
How the bloody hell did I end up rating this 5+ stars? eh, meh, pfft.
This is one of those niche type stories that is not for everyone. On many levels. Immature people below a certain age should not read this. Mature people of any age should probably not read this. People looking for graphic depictions of sex . . . should look elsewhere. People looking for an almost fetish-like devotion to descriptions of binding/deeply detailed and extensively detailed descriptions of leather and buckles, and bits, and bindings/etc. should look elsewhere. I'm not exactly sure whose left in the possible reading audience, but them, they should read this. *nods* (I have left a lot, I figured I didn't need to continue down a list, I'd never finish, infinite list - 'those who like cat stories shouldn't look here' (well, the roommate is wearing a cat costume, but . . . ); 'those who like horror should not . . . ' (well, there's a tinge of psychological horror but . . . ) etc. etc.).
Rating: WTF I rated it before.
April 4 2018
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