Halloween Pony by I. Binder

I'm in the vaguely confused situation wherein I am fairly certain I wrote a review (strong sense I attempted to spell the game the two main characters played, but had to double check the spelling), but do not see one here now, plus, I do not actually recall rating this story this highly.  5+ stars? Seriously? Shesh.

A man and a woman play a game.  She's drunk. He's . . .it's not stated.  They've been dating for a while. She's a teenager.  He's creepily older than her. Like, 30+ year old dating a 18 year older creepy.  I do not recall which game in particular they play, nor if she ever had success against him playing the game. But she's feeling recklessly overconfident, so agrees to a bet.  He'll give her enough money to go to college if she wins; she'll wear a costume he picks out for her for a Halloween party (I forgot to include: 'he's filthy rich, she's cleanly poor (what, we doing opposites, yes? What's the opposite of filthy rich?  Well, she doesn't have money, 'k?)'; is instant red flag if one side of a wager is some massively generous reward, and other side is something 'minor').

Woman, as expected, loses.  All of this mentioned in passing, I don't think it was actually mentioned in detail though.  Woman doesn't mind, really - she's going to be able to go to a Halloween party, which should be great, and all she has to do is wear whatever he picks out. How bad can it be?

Day of party occurs. She arrives early to get into the costume; she has no clue what he chose for her.  She's the kind to be, apparently, constantly aroused.  He keeps her on the peak of arousal as he provides her with the costume, and she puts it on.  Talking her into doing certain things she might otherwise not do but for being so aroused. Like put on the costume sans undergarments (has the costume been used before? Has it at least been cleaned? Bare skin against rented costume? nooooo).  She might be quite aroused, but she's still aware enough of her surroundings to notice that her nipples and breasts are kind of very visible in this costume.  He makes some off hand comment about how he'll take care of things.  She, being really horny, continues to put on costume.  Assumes she'll put it on, they'll fuck, she'll then get him to add things - like . . . um, well, better cover for her breasts. I forget what all else.

While still on the peak of arousal, he binds up her arms, restrains her, and shoves a gag like thingie into her mouth.  Then proceeds to lead her outside. She's, understandably, freaking out by this point.

Whereupon he leashes her to some post like thing outdoors. Then leaves. Vehicle arrives. She's horrified/embarrased/incredibly pissed off.  People exit the vehicle. It's a horse . . . um . . . use my words . . . horse trailer thingie. The type of thing you transport horses in.  The people from the vehicle, the front part at least, proceed to remove three women dressed like the main female character of the story.  I failed to mention how she's dressed, yes? hmms. Right, so, she's been dressed up like a ponygirl (I also forgot to mention that he did actually tell her how he was going to dress her, I'd forgotten - so, forget what I said before about her not knowing -> she'd no clue what he meant, and was vaguely interested how she'd be dressed like a pony. Especially as there's just one of her, and most pony costumes she knew of previously involved someone wearing a horse head, and someone else wearing horse rear; that's not the kind of pony she's dressed up like).

One thing leads to another - and I interject two things: the woman is deeply annoyed/angry/etc. about everything going on; deeply aroused - and the exposed woman is attached to a two ponygirl cart.  And proceeds to be forced to transport people longish distance from gate up to house. While being whipped.

Other stuff happens. Like a roommate appearing, and complications, and stuff. And people talking about her right in front of her, without actually talking to her. Etc.etc.

How the bloody hell did I end up rating this 5+ stars?  eh, meh, pfft.

This is one of those niche type stories that is not for everyone. On many levels. Immature people below a certain age should not read this. Mature people of any age should probably not read this. People looking for graphic depictions of sex . . . should look elsewhere.  People looking for an almost fetish-like devotion to descriptions of binding/deeply detailed and extensively detailed descriptions of leather and buckles, and bits, and bindings/etc. should look elsewhere.  I'm not exactly sure whose left in the possible reading audience, but them, they should read this. *nods*  (I have left a lot, I figured I didn't need to continue down a list, I'd never finish, infinite list - 'those who like cat stories shouldn't look here' (well, the roommate is wearing a cat costume, but . . . ); 'those who like horror should not . . . ' (well, there's a tinge of psychological horror but . . . ) etc. etc.).

Rating: WTF I rated it before.

April 4 2018

The Pony Girl Diva by Jim Lyon

The Pony Girl Diva: Lesbian D/s Erotica by Jim Lyon

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


This really was much more of a story outline than a story. Don't get me wrong, there were elements in each section to add a level of 'story' to the activity, but this was very bare bones. Very little was revealed or conveyed. By that I mean about the characters, the world in which they inhabit, about anything.

Someone could respond with something with 'well it's erotica so...'; to which I'd respond 1) even with erotica I want to know the characters, to feel them, inhabit them, to know them (oops, said know twice); 2) there were elements of erotica in the story, but it was as bare bones as everything else - heck, the sex scene was more fade to black than anything else (weird, considering) - though even there, I wasn't sad that it was fade to black since they lept to 'let's put on a gigantic strap-on and fuck you in the ass with it' without any conversation so . . . . (and yes indeed I'm glad this was fade to black - I'm so not into anal that if this wasn't roughly 0.01% of the story, and at the end, I'd probably have fled screaming).

Right, so. This story read.

Rating: 2.66

February 19 2018



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Named and Shamed by C.P. Mandara

Named and Shamed
by C.P. Mandara
Pages: 160
Date: February 6 2014
Publisher: Chimera Books
Series: Pony Tales (#4)

Review
Rating: 3.5
Read: February 21 to October 2 2016

225 days to read a 160 page book, eh? heh. I read erotica slowly if it longer than a certain number of pages. In short small gulps.

It has been way too long since I read the first three stories in this series, so the fact that we are only on day three by the time this book ends means something, but I'm not sure what. Since this is book 4 in the series. Time moves super slowly.

So. A bratty, rich bitch went on vacation if I recall correctly. But was tricked, ended up at a pony farm - the kind with ponyboys and ponygirls. And she's going to be made one of them. That's the lead up to this story here - which consists mostly of Petals (her pony name) having straps put on, taken off, put on, spanked, dragged around in and outside, soaped with rough soap; alternating forced orgasms with forced . . . um . . right, denial of orgasms. Or, in other words, not much is happening. Then her ass virginity, along with whoever it will be who will be her trainer are separately auctioned off to round off the book.

Meanwhile - a seemingly random group of people have their POV's in addition to Jenny aka Petals. We have Lyle, Mark Mathews, Kyle, Isabella (or whatever her name is), one of Mark's non-blonde 'secretaries' . . . and. .. hmm. Possibly that's it. The non-Jenny moments are brief snippets that intrude and kind of feel like intrusions from another story/book - especially the ones that occur in the outside world.

Interesting book. If it had ended differently I'd have immediately acquired the next in the series. The 'drama' that ends this one, and begins the next (as per the 'next time' segment) is an annoying distraction that I'm not sure I want to read any time soon.

October 2 2016

Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale by Felicia Montoya

Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale
by Felicia Montoya
Pages: 55
Date: August 19 2015
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 5.0 out of 5.0
Read: October 17 2015

My first read by this author. And likely I might have put off longer but for the readathon I was doing. Since it was available. And I wanted something to read.

Ooh neat, an auction. Katie Trammel, now known as "Peaches", is the main character. And is in a ponygirl auction, as a ponygirl. When the story opens. Another ponygirl short story that starts with the main character already in ponygirl stuff. Now to see if this one also will fall back to the old classic of 'flashback: this is how I got here'.

Adding to the humiliation of standing there with 'my boobs out and my shave pussy on display, potential buyers pawing me, seeing how I moisten when their fingers probe my two lower holes' is the addition of 'the lezzie-bitch from college' - Veronica. Hmms. Veronica seems like she might be fun. I hope she wins Peaches. *nods, drools*

Well, that's different. Started a story. Read story. Looked and . . whoa, it was at 100%! A full load! That makes me happy. *nods*

Oh. I just realized I forgot to write anything between drooling and the end. I kind of fell into a trance. It was a fun story, it was. Quite fun.

Her Troika: Part I by Trent Evans

Her Troika: Part I
by Trent Evans
Pages: 53
Date: May 21 2013
Publisher: Tritium Press

Review
Rating: 2 out of 5
Read: November 26 2013

The prologue suggested ponygirl stuff.   A little too detached from the action but pulled in. Then story, at least part 1, had nothing to do about that. Instead it turned into an auction story.  Interesting enough idea,  so I read.

The action seemed to detached.  'Stuff' happening in prologue,  but more hinted at than anything else.   Then the actual story started. Was interesting, quite. Action out of sight, but intriguing.   But what ever excitement that could have been had seemed leached away by a newcomer to the scene who kept making loud comments to his friend.

Bah.  I don't like Derek from this small slice, and not really like the husband character either.  Their were some intriguing characters, like the CEO and wife, but they barely had part in this slice.