Art Model Stand In by Maria X.

Art Model Stand In by Maria X.

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


Second short story I've tried by this author. And another one involving a college student. This time at school - a student, Patricia, is not doing well in an art class. The teacher lets her know she can get extra credit by being a nude model. She does the extra credit work.

Adding a level of humiliation to the story (because, apparently, need to add humiliation to these type of stories needs to be multiple layered apparently) - Patricia is haing trouble because of the sexual nature of the class and Patricia's deeply religious upbringing (um, why she take the class, is elective). And if she didn't really know what the class would be about - she'd have learned within the first week, way within the zone of being able to drop the class. It annoys me when 'heaps of humiliation' are added for stupid reasons - it's not a bloody class she needed to take, she could have easily have dropped it so . . . - she'd rather fail the class than have her parents 'so ashamed of her' for dropping class (WTF is that about)? They wouldn't be ashamed of her failing but would be if she dorpped the class? mmphs.

"Patricia had had a crush on him since the first day of class." - oh, now I understand why she hadn't dropped the class.

This author seems to have something of a shaved fetish. This is the second story in which a character's being 'completely bare down there' has been a major issue/deal. First story the young woman was seen to have shaved everything and was called a slut. Here the young woman is asked to shave for the photo shoot. And she's acting very shocked and horrified. Shaving fetish. Did not know that existed. 'That seemed so lewd!'

'The only pubic hair she had was a small triangle just at the top of her slit.' - um, wha? This . . . she'd almost fainted from shock when she heard she had to shave everything off. And she barely has any hair down there to begin with? shesh.

Is waste an alternate spelling for waist? This is the second story with waste instead of waist.

Oh for fuck sake . . ..

I like nude model stories, but this was just crude. And included power imbalance/blackmail type of stuff. All that touching of that nude model - rough pulling on nipples, etc. Plus the woman didn't want to people to know who she was, and her 'friend' says her name revealing who she is, lying to her about the class knowing it is her despite the mask. Bah. pfft.

'It doesn't usually get that out of hand.' - even the teacher, who did nothing, knew it got out of hand.

Rating: 2.90

September 10 2017



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Jen's Humiliating Airport Adventure by Maria X.

Jen's Humiliating Airport Adventure by Maria X.

My rating: 3 of 5 stars


A woman in between the third and fourth year of college is heading home after the semester ended. She's apparently not traveled much and isn't too capable of handling security check-points. When something causes the scanning amchine to beep, the 'fat loser' (her words) came over asking if she had in metal. She, oddly, flips out and starts throwing around words like fuck ('I'm not wearing any fucking metal!').

Her attitude continues to not help things, the TSA agent(s) (later another one turns up), continues to try to handle the situation, until he decides to take advantage. After one of them places a hand on her shoulder, the young woman physically assaults them and ends up handcuffed. Lead away for more interrogation.

Apparently she forgot she had something metal stuck into her nipple. Easily forgotten, right? I say that because she mentioned her great body toned from swimming like 5 times, mentioned her hard nipples poking into her tight dress (after being forced to remove her bra) several times, but not once did she mention the metal piercing. Until, oops, there it is.

Right so - several words wrong, etc. etc. (like agin for again; waste for waist). Odd actions in this story. Like the male agents strip searching the female. The female constantly kicking the agents (in the stomach, in the groin) that kept making things worse. People acting shocked and calling her a slut for being shaved. In this day and age? Seriously? mmphs.

And then she spit on him. Bah. A TSTL character is supposed to be in an urban fantasy, or the like, not here (to stupid to live).

Story disturbed me.

Rating: 2.89

September 10 2017



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Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale by Felicia Montoya

Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale
by Felicia Montoya
Pages: 55
Date: August 19 2015
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 5.0 out of 5.0
Read: October 17 2015

My first read by this author. And likely I might have put off longer but for the readathon I was doing. Since it was available. And I wanted something to read.

Ooh neat, an auction. Katie Trammel, now known as "Peaches", is the main character. And is in a ponygirl auction, as a ponygirl. When the story opens. Another ponygirl short story that starts with the main character already in ponygirl stuff. Now to see if this one also will fall back to the old classic of 'flashback: this is how I got here'.

Adding to the humiliation of standing there with 'my boobs out and my shave pussy on display, potential buyers pawing me, seeing how I moisten when their fingers probe my two lower holes' is the addition of 'the lezzie-bitch from college' - Veronica. Hmms. Veronica seems like she might be fun. I hope she wins Peaches. *nods, drools*

Well, that's different. Started a story. Read story. Looked and . . whoa, it was at 100%! A full load! That makes me happy. *nods*

Oh. I just realized I forgot to write anything between drooling and the end. I kind of fell into a trance. It was a fun story, it was. Quite fun.

The Student, The Rogue & The Catburglar
by Laura Gibson
Pages: 290
Date: August 26 2012
Publisher: Author
Series: Sophie Aughton's Diary (first in series)

Review
Rating: 4.0 out of 5.0
Read: April 17 to May 27 2015

hmm. Another one of those "I've no bloody clue what to put in here" type of . . um . . comments.

I've no real clue what I just read. Over one or more months. I read it because I'd been intrigued by seeing some stuff Laura Gibson had put up on DeviantArt. Roughly similar to this here book. Pictures with captions, though. I mention only to note that I wasn't really sure what I was getting myself into when I started . . . and I'm still not really sure.

Apparently this is the "diary" of one "Sophie Aughton". I do not know the school system in England, but I believe she starts the book as a freshman in college. Or the equivalent. Other than every once in a while remembering to actually attend classes and study (actually, I think she did attend and study, she just was late a lot; and fell back on prior learning in moments when she was called upon to explain an assignment that she forgot to do, but had knowledge about from whatever comes before college in England). That was a completely messed up sentence. hmms. Other than attending classes, Sophie attended several clubs, specifically the Live Action Role Playing club, and the karate club. In addition she spent lots and lots of time in an online virtual world.

A shy woman at the start of the book. And mostly at the end. Though by the end she's just embarrased as she does stuff she would have been too shy to do at the beginning of the book. hmms. Is that a spoiler? I keep distracting myself. As I ramble. As the book unfolds Sophie plays at bondage games inside the virtual world, and real life bondage games by herself and with her roommate.

bah. I've no real idea what to put here for this book and instead of anything coherent, I have this. The book took me a lot longer than normal for me to complete. There's a definite beginning middle and . . . well, the end ended with one of those *stares at computer screen, squeaks "that's !"*. To a certain extent there were way too many characters. Especially since so many of them were more than just ciphers. Trying to keep track of them all was hard. In terms of the erotic nature of the book . . . - well, some was exciting, some was . . .well, it was mostly exciting.

Oh, the virtual world. I wanted to get back to that. The action in the virtual world and during the the role playing events were shown . . . . as if they were happening . . um . . .. Hmms. Let me try it this way. Sophie would log into the virtual world as Feline. As Feline, she did stuff. And reacted in a manner as if the action was occurring in real life. Instead of in a virtual reality. Like, Feline ended up exposed a few times, Sophie, controlling the avatar called Feline, became quite embarrased as she was exposed. So, an emotional connection. Another example, as Feline, Sophie did such things as get involved in hogtied races, dance on stripper poles, etc. All described as if she was actually doing them. And feeling them. And being embarrased by them. I'm probably not explaining this well. By "actually doing them" - obviously the avatar is "doing" something when the real life person controlling the avatar does it. What I meant by "actually doing them" can be best seen when Feline was on the stripper pole. Dancing. Getting tips. The person giving the tip made some kind of comment. Feline's dance routine was disrupted by her embarassment. Which . . . isn't what would happen in a virtual world. Well, a 3D virtual world. In a 3D virtual world the dance is preprogramed. The real life person clicks something, the avatar dances - the most that can be seen as controlling the dance is the ability to start, stop, change to a different dance. But the dance is preprogrammed. It's not going to morph, improve, degrade, based on the avatar. If it's a text virtual world, everything that happened would be whatever you typed. bah.

No matter. I've gone and confused myself. And anyone brave enough to reach this point in the review. So . . I'll just skip off to the side now and . . um . . stop typing.

ETA: I was going to make some comment on the virtual world in terms of - which virtual worlds might have been the basis for the one in the book? But, didn't.

The image below is of one of the characters, Sophie I assume, wearing the bunny suit. Well, Sophie wears a bunny suit in the book.

Image from DeviatArt

Cassie's Conundrum by Eric Stray

Cassie's Conundrum
by Eric Stray
Pages: 29
Date: September 21 2014
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 1.0 out of 5.0
Read: January 9 2015

Hmms. So . . .. Randomly stumbling around Kindle Unlimited stories. Spot this one. Check it out. And . . . a girl gets turned into a dog? And can't reach orgasm except under certain circumstances? And is drooling over dogs and what dogs might do to her?

Eek.  This crossed the line, it did.   And while mind-control/brainwashing and the like seems . . . possible, the reaction of the pet store was quite odd.  Unbelievable.

Actually the whole thing leans way too far into unbelievablity land.  Reads too much like an all powerful author getting himself off rather than a story with credible characters. Don't need to be fully formed, just something more than puppets to push around while squealing.

Ah. And another "Master" asking someone too out of it to understand or give consent, if they wish to "continue".  Too out of it in a constantly horny, can't stop rubbing themselves and moaning like a puppy in heat while barely keeping their clothes on, and sometimes forgetting to do so.  That out of it.

Adding fake little "she gave consent" scenes like that annoy me.  Then again, whatever her decision turned out to be is left up to the reader.

A woman is dominated by a story author. She calls him Master, which is why I got the idea that it's a "him", or man.  The LGBT tag is used because of her actions in the pet store.  I guess that would make her at least bisexual? hmms. Don't care.

Only One Naked by Cassie Caine

Only One Naked
by Cassie Caine
Pages: 35
Date: September 18 2011
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 4.7 out of 5.0
Read: January 6 2015

Third story I've read by this author. Has the things I liked in from the first two without the things I disliked.

Woman in her twenties works in her aunt's bookstore while aunt off being ill and while looking for a 'real' job.  It's summer and hot. She wears clothing that she might not otherwise because it is summer and hot.  She is reminded of this when she keeps getting asked to climb step-ladders to get books.  And her customers look up her skirt.  She's embarrassed and stuff.

One of her customers shoves a flier into her hands and demands she put it up.  It asks for a nude model.  Time passes.  Nicole, the woman who gave Massie the flier, comes back.  Times up, class that night.  No model.  Massie gets lured into modeling knowing she will have to be nude and can't even wear a bathing suit.

She's embarrassed, fearful, nervous, and oddly quite aroused.  She is directed in how to pose in various revealing positions.

Up to here, the story, the set-up almost exactly like the other story I read by Cassie Caine, "Adventures of a Nude Art Model."  Except there the woman lured into posing nude is a librarian and a mother of an almost grown daughter.  And there the character lured into posing nude eventually models with a naked man.  While here the fact that she is the "only one naked" is part of the turn on for her.

Just as "Adventures" turns off into a different direction after the art class, this story does as well.  Though some element of what happens with Nicole and Massie is hinted at, implied that will happen, in the other story actually occurs in this one. I.e., Nicole dominates Massie.  The dominating in Adventures is taken up by the daughter, which is the part I disliked about Adventures.  That and the introduction of a nude male model.

hmm. I may or may not have already put spoiler stuff in. I'll leave off here.  Just mentioning that two customers lure Massie off to embarrassed naked female events.  And the author, for whatever reason, sometimes calls Massie, Milli (or Melly or Milly, some other name).