Showing posts with label Mind Control. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Mind Control. Show all posts
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale by Felicia Montoya
Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale
by Felicia Montoya
Pages: 55
Date: August 19 2015
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 5.0 out of 5.0
Read: October 17 2015
My first read by this author. And likely I might have put off longer but for the readathon I was doing. Since it was available. And I wanted something to read.
Ooh neat, an auction. Katie Trammel, now known as "Peaches", is the main character. And is in a ponygirl auction, as a ponygirl. When the story opens. Another ponygirl short story that starts with the main character already in ponygirl stuff. Now to see if this one also will fall back to the old classic of 'flashback: this is how I got here'.
Adding to the humiliation of standing there with 'my boobs out and my shave pussy on display, potential buyers pawing me, seeing how I moisten when their fingers probe my two lower holes' is the addition of 'the lezzie-bitch from college' - Veronica. Hmms. Veronica seems like she might be fun. I hope she wins Peaches. *nods, drools*
Well, that's different. Started a story. Read story. Looked and . . whoa, it was at 100%! A full load! That makes me happy. *nods*
Oh. I just realized I forgot to write anything between drooling and the end. I kind of fell into a trance. It was a fun story, it was. Quite fun.
Thursday, May 21, 2015
Villainess Love by Lexi Archer
Villainess Love by Lexi Archer
Pages: 260
Date: January 16 2015
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 4.0 out of 5.0 stars
Read: May 21 2015
I didn't actually realize immediately, that this was an erotic superhero story. I should have, I know. What with other works by the author, the cover, the "steamy lesbian" bit in the description. Still, I didn't notice. Was coming off reading several superhero books (prose and graphic novel) and just saw this one and picked it up to read.
It's an interesting enough story. Apparently it's a "they didn't appreciate me, so I'll be a mad scientist" type story. Though this time the mad scientist is a woman. There are other "mad" female supervillains out there, I don't mean to imply that there aren't.
Harley Quinn's character morphs between being goofy, insane, mad, and playing at insane. And has a genius level intelligence. Though most of the time that part gets forgotten and she gets presented as a goofy dim bimbo. Also, a mad psychiatrist isn't the normal type of thing someone things of first when they hear "mad scientist".
Poison Ivy is a mad scientist. At times. Most of the times that aspect doesn't really come to the forefront as she acts more like a magical creature with powers over plants while wearing barely anything. But she is a scientist. And quite mad.
hmms. I could go on. Ok, strike that "this time the mad scientist is a women" and replace with . . . um . . . "mad scientist story". Right. That.
Ok then. Right from the get go the reader learns that this specific mad scientist isn't into madly creating waves of chaos and destruction. She goes out of her way to keep from killing, and from damaging . . . too much. Heck, in the first fight depicted in the book, the superhero causes more damage than the supervillain.
So, right. There's this supervillian. She's quite bored, so she robs a bank. In person. She has the technology that she could rob it electronically, or, if she really wanted to, say, roll around naked in cash, can walk in all causal like, wearing some hidden technology, push some buttons, and poof - vault of cash teleported elsewhere. Without anyone knowing she did it. So, why does so attack a bank in full supervillian costume? Enter the vault, set up teleportation, and . . . leave by the front door instead of teleporting out? Because, as I said, she's bored. Not only is she the top supervillian in the city, no superhero stands a chance against her. And the cops just have symbolic gestures of "we are trying to stop her". Because they know they can't stop her. And she's nice enough to limit the damage, and death.
Except, there's this brand new superhero in town. Who zooms in and beats the tar out of the supervillian. While also causing massive collateral damage. Granted, the supervillian was kinda distracted by how aroused she was by the superhero, but still, the beat down was mostly a combination of 1) superhero just that good; 2) supervillian is out of practice with fighting someone at or above their weight class; 3) supervillian is just so gosh darn aroused by the superhero's mere presence (and confusion of same, since they are both female and she doesn't recall being overly attracted to women before).
Going in the way I did, without realizing the erotic nature of the book, I would have to say that the overall story has some neat little twists on superhero/supervillian/random non-supers interactions. While at the same time the story was . . . well, roughly on the level of a superhero story. A campy superhero story. With graphic sex. As opposed to only skimpily clad supers and implied intimacy.
Well, in terms of "great literature", this ain't that. In terms of superhero stories, it's decent. In terms of erotic stories, it has what it needed. Checked the boxes, so to speak.
This book certainly isn't the best book I've ever read, but I would most likely gobble up at least one more book set in the same universe.
Friday, January 9, 2015
Cassie's Conundrum by Eric Stray
Cassie's Conundrum
by Eric Stray
Pages: 29
Date: September 21 2014
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 1.0 out of 5.0
Read: January 9 2015
Hmms. So . . .. Randomly stumbling around Kindle Unlimited stories. Spot this one. Check it out. And . . . a girl gets turned into a dog? And can't reach orgasm except under certain circumstances? And is drooling over dogs and what dogs might do to her?
Eek. This crossed the line, it did. And while mind-control/brainwashing and the like seems . . . possible, the reaction of the pet store was quite odd. Unbelievable.
Actually the whole thing leans way too far into unbelievablity land. Reads too much like an all powerful author getting himself off rather than a story with credible characters. Don't need to be fully formed, just something more than puppets to push around while squealing.
Ah. And another "Master" asking someone too out of it to understand or give consent, if they wish to "continue". Too out of it in a constantly horny, can't stop rubbing themselves and moaning like a puppy in heat while barely keeping their clothes on, and sometimes forgetting to do so. That out of it.
Adding fake little "she gave consent" scenes like that annoy me. Then again, whatever her decision turned out to be is left up to the reader.
A woman is dominated by a story author. She calls him Master, which is why I got the idea that it's a "him", or man. The LGBT tag is used because of her actions in the pet store. I guess that would make her at least bisexual? hmms. Don't care.
Labels:
Adult Fiction,
BDSM,
FF,
Humiliation,
LGBT,
MF,
Mind Control,
Pet-Play,
Public,
Puppygirl,
Short Fiction
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