Monday, May 25, 2015
Sandra Smiles by B.J. Slippy
Sandra Smiles
by B.J. Slippy
Pages: 20
Date: March 10 2014
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 4.25 out of 5.0
Read: May 25 2015
First half (or maybe 40%) was kind of slow. Getting a rough vague idea of the main character. And first date that just involved meeting in a park. Then things picked up. Erotica-wise. hmms. Picked up in terms of eroticism.
Ah. Good. Drama. See, this is like a typical romantic comedy movie. Must add weird tension in the form of misunderstandings and slightly wrong word choices. I'm being slightly sacastic if that isn't clear.
In this case, after "going down" (no idea why I'm putting quotes on that), the blind woman tells the fat one that she doesn't have to go down on her. The fat one (what, the fat one's size, and the blind one's blindness are important to the story . . . fine) . . .. After Sandra goes down on Missy, pushes her to climax, she adjusts herself and sits on the sofa next to her. Causally commenting that Missy didn't need to return the favor. She just wanted to make sure that . . . right, I didn't really get it, but meh. She wanted to make sure her guest had fun with the blind women, basically. Missy misinterpreted that to mean tat Sandra was pitying her for being fat. Or something. And storms out. See, tension and drama.
Cute story. The overall story was interesting. The graphic sections read a little mechanically. Just a little. At times. At other times not.
Ended a little . . . well, not abruptly. hmms. Ended quickly? Bah. It was a short story. It had a discernable beginning, middle, and a . . . um, something of an ending. I suppose it says something that I want to know more. To follow more of their story. I suspect that isn't going to happen. Oh well.
Labels:
Adult Fiction,
Blind,
Erotica,
FF,
Lesbian Fiction,
LGBT,
Romance,
Short Fiction
Sunday, May 24, 2015
Taken By The Babysitter by J. O'Brien
Taken By The Babysitter
by J. O'Brien
Pages: 16
Date: December 18 2014
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 4.5 out of 5.0
Read: May 24 2015
It's somewhat offputting and annoying when there are mistakes immediately spotted. But, meh, it's at the beginning so I'll ignore and press on. (I assume that the second sentence is supposed to be "It figures." and not "I figures.", but, eh, perhaps it's supposed to be I Figures.).
eww. The babysitter stopped by. Spots a vibrator. Immediately puts it into her body. Um . . . eww.
And then my brain kind of went all hazy on me so if there are more "errors", I wasn't in a position to see them. To comprehend them. hmms.
Secret Sorority by J. O'Brien
Secret Sorority
by J. O'Brien
Pages: 14
Date: December 15 2014
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 3.75 out of 5
Read: May 24 2015
Wasn't sure if I wanted to read this specific story, but it's the first in the "series" that contained the short story I just read so . . .. Figure I'd give this one a try.
A young woman is driven by her friend to an initiation to a secret sorority. She's barely dressed, wearing tiny skirt, barely there top. Doesn't know what to expect.
As fantasy, a quite exciting story. I'm not going to think of the real life issues I might have with the situation.
Slightly less exciting than the first O'Brien story I read.
Friday, May 22, 2015
Miss Midnight Versus the Diabolical League of Perverts by Amanda Clover
Miss Midnight Versus the Diabolical League of Perverts
by Amanda Clover
Pages: 53
Date: June 1 2014
Publisher: Author
Series: Metro City Heroines
Review
Rating: 1.5 out of 5.0
Read: May 22 2015
Gah. A superhero who becomes aroused when she is attacked by a rapist, by the thought of raping him. By . . gah. ewwww. The idea of "getting even" or "crushing rapists balls" isn't, necessarily the eww/gah/ick part, it's the obvious arousal, dripping arousal of the superhero as she attacks the rapist.
So, the superhero is Miss Midnight, aka Beth Bernard. Nothing strange about those names. But her roommate is . . . Cookie Fundue? hmms.
Over the top action. Odd bursts of sex.
Thursday, May 21, 2015
Villainess Love by Lexi Archer
Villainess Love by Lexi Archer
Pages: 260
Date: January 16 2015
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 4.0 out of 5.0 stars
Read: May 21 2015
I didn't actually realize immediately, that this was an erotic superhero story. I should have, I know. What with other works by the author, the cover, the "steamy lesbian" bit in the description. Still, I didn't notice. Was coming off reading several superhero books (prose and graphic novel) and just saw this one and picked it up to read.
It's an interesting enough story. Apparently it's a "they didn't appreciate me, so I'll be a mad scientist" type story. Though this time the mad scientist is a woman. There are other "mad" female supervillains out there, I don't mean to imply that there aren't.
Harley Quinn's character morphs between being goofy, insane, mad, and playing at insane. And has a genius level intelligence. Though most of the time that part gets forgotten and she gets presented as a goofy dim bimbo. Also, a mad psychiatrist isn't the normal type of thing someone things of first when they hear "mad scientist".
Poison Ivy is a mad scientist. At times. Most of the times that aspect doesn't really come to the forefront as she acts more like a magical creature with powers over plants while wearing barely anything. But she is a scientist. And quite mad.
hmms. I could go on. Ok, strike that "this time the mad scientist is a women" and replace with . . . um . . . "mad scientist story". Right. That.
Ok then. Right from the get go the reader learns that this specific mad scientist isn't into madly creating waves of chaos and destruction. She goes out of her way to keep from killing, and from damaging . . . too much. Heck, in the first fight depicted in the book, the superhero causes more damage than the supervillain.
So, right. There's this supervillian. She's quite bored, so she robs a bank. In person. She has the technology that she could rob it electronically, or, if she really wanted to, say, roll around naked in cash, can walk in all causal like, wearing some hidden technology, push some buttons, and poof - vault of cash teleported elsewhere. Without anyone knowing she did it. So, why does so attack a bank in full supervillian costume? Enter the vault, set up teleportation, and . . . leave by the front door instead of teleporting out? Because, as I said, she's bored. Not only is she the top supervillian in the city, no superhero stands a chance against her. And the cops just have symbolic gestures of "we are trying to stop her". Because they know they can't stop her. And she's nice enough to limit the damage, and death.
Except, there's this brand new superhero in town. Who zooms in and beats the tar out of the supervillian. While also causing massive collateral damage. Granted, the supervillian was kinda distracted by how aroused she was by the superhero, but still, the beat down was mostly a combination of 1) superhero just that good; 2) supervillian is out of practice with fighting someone at or above their weight class; 3) supervillian is just so gosh darn aroused by the superhero's mere presence (and confusion of same, since they are both female and she doesn't recall being overly attracted to women before).
Going in the way I did, without realizing the erotic nature of the book, I would have to say that the overall story has some neat little twists on superhero/supervillian/random non-supers interactions. While at the same time the story was . . . well, roughly on the level of a superhero story. A campy superhero story. With graphic sex. As opposed to only skimpily clad supers and implied intimacy.
Well, in terms of "great literature", this ain't that. In terms of superhero stories, it's decent. In terms of erotic stories, it has what it needed. Checked the boxes, so to speak.
This book certainly isn't the best book I've ever read, but I would most likely gobble up at least one more book set in the same universe.
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