Taken By The Babysitter
by J. O'Brien
Pages: 16
Date: December 18 2014
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 4.5 out of 5.0
Read: May 24 2015
It's somewhat offputting and annoying when there are mistakes immediately spotted. But, meh, it's at the beginning so I'll ignore and press on. (I assume that the second sentence is supposed to be "It figures." and not "I figures.", but, eh, perhaps it's supposed to be I Figures.).
eww. The babysitter stopped by. Spots a vibrator. Immediately puts it into her body. Um . . . eww.
And then my brain kind of went all hazy on me so if there are more "errors", I wasn't in a position to see them. To comprehend them. hmms.
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