Tuesday, March 14, 2017

Women of the Dark Streets: Lesbian Paranormal edited by Radclyffe and Stacia Seaman

Women of the Dark Streets: Lesbian ParanormalWomen of the Dark Streets: Lesbian Paranormal by Radclyffe

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Interesting how many authors in this collection I've already read/sampled before.

Things are not as they seem. About the fifth time I was about to write that for a story section, I realized I should just put that up here. I'm sure there's some story where this phrase doesn't work, but so many of the stories use it as bedrock - as foundation.

A ghost that doesn't realize they are a ghost. A mortal human not realizing she's talking to a ghost (different story from that first sentence). Werewolves, vampires, fairies, insane women, and the one story I can think of off the top of my head where people go into it knowing about 'the creatures of the night', the 'not as they seem' would be the human mortal human who is 'not as she seems' - human and mortal, yes, but she's also undercover trying to 'bust' the 'bad people'.

Several occasions we have people who suddenly realize they knew the other(s) from some past life (or lives). Mixed in with two travel related stories (well, the first two stories in this volume are travel related) - one involving a train accident and the search for terrorists; other involves the TSA and how, while it appears they are really really incompetent, there's a reason for that.

I suppose 'Full Moon Weekend' wouldn't fall into the 'not what they seem' - since it involves two women, a shifter and a human, but both know of and intimately know each other. And nothing 'surprising' pops up - other than just what one of the women can shift into. Which is neat in and of itself, but not really the type of 'surprising' indicated by 'not what they seem'.

Several historical fictions mixed with fantasy - like Faraday's 'The Trickster Codex' set in, I believe, the 1940s and having a noir vibe; and Buck's 'Forget Me Not' set in the 1890s - and one of those ghost stories.

Devils, vampires, wolves, cheetahs, dolphins, turtles, several horsies (one story has that woman who can shift into basically anything, so she shifts into a horse, another has two 'skin walkers' who can 'control from a distance' animal familars, like horses), succubus (succubi?), demons and a whole host of ghosts wandering in and out of these . . . what is it, 16? stories (23). Many of which touch on death and grief; many of which touch on immortal lives.

The Stories
Merry Shannon: Lucky Number Seven
FBI Agent; terrorism

Hard to say exactly what's going on in ths one without giving everything away immediately. Though it is fairly obvious from the beginning what's going on.

A bombing occurs on a train. An FBI agent and a rider from that train try to track down the terrorists. Then reports come in regarding another attack that will occur shortly.

Rating: 4.33

March 11 2017

Sam Cameron: Come to Me
TSA; Demons (angels?); lawyers

Apparently there's a reason the TSA seems so incompetent - it's on purpose, because they are actually screening for more than they said they were - for demons and the like. Main character works as an agent collecting the 'captured' creatures. Not everything is as it seems, though, perhaps - including that attractive woman who shows interest in main character.

Rating: 3.30

March 11 2017

Meghan O'Brien: Full Moon Weekend
Shifters; Fantasy; vacation; public nudity

Eve Thomas and Selene Rhodes from Wild are back for some more action.

Eve and Selene head into the woods for a weekend of, as it is put in the story, nakedness and fucking. Eve wishes to prove/show to Selene that she no longer needs to be locked down/restrained when the moon is full.

Interesting little story. Certain amount of graphicness to the story, but a certain bit less than expected considering author (and how erotic some of her stories can be) and expressed nature of the weekend (a fuck weekend).

Rating: 3.75

March 10 2017

Jane Fletcher: Tempora Mutantur
doctor; professor

A woman almost dies from swine flu. Ever since then, ever since that occasion when 'she should have died', she can't stop obsessing over the doctor. She keeps having this odd dreams, involving volcanoes, large ships, etc. And doing everything to catch glimpses of said doctor.

There's more than meets the eye.

Rating: 4.99

March 10 2017

Jess Faraday: The Trickster Codex
Private Investigator, Los Angeles, 1930s (or 1940s), Noir

Amelia 'Amy' or 'Mel' Archer - private investigator. Poor. Gives only food of day to dog spotted on street. Very skinny - more because can't afford food than for fashion reasons. Doesn't get much work because of 'that bastard Philip Marlowe hanging around' (apparently Marlowe had worked for her, then left and stole all her clients and contacts). Former WASP fighter pilot - shot down over enemy lines. Had been best in code class, but kicked out for lack of balls and dick.

Gets a case from Lorena Claw ('five and a half feet of gorgeous, with shoulders like a general, black hair and eyes, and skin like red desert clay'), a 'civilian consultant currently overseeing a project involving a new kind of code' ('Dr. Lorena Claw, Adjunct Instructor of Navajo Language at USC.') Claw has some transmissions using the code, but can't determine what is being said so wants Archer's help. The Feds get involved.

And then . . . um, what?

Interesting, intriguing story. Didn't go anywhere then fizzled away like a cloud of cats.

Rating: 3.79

March 10 2017

Victoria Oldham: For all Eternity
Professor; Demons (view spoiler); Italy

An american professor teaches at a university in Italy while living on a houseboat. Nightly she dreams of a woman ravishing her. She wakes up covered in evidence of her dreams.

At the university, her class is about how women are treated and myths and the like - badly.

This story here doesn't exactly help in that specific situation.

Rating: 2.15

March 12 2017

Karis Walsh: Solstice
Shiters/Werewolves; Soldiers/Resistance; War

A young werewolf woman, an alpha, is tasked by her General to go to a specific location and kill Leo - the hated leader of the other side.

She seduces a young female guard to try to help her get inside. Though she finds more than she expected.

Rating: 4.25

March 12 2017

Valerie Bronwen: The Other Side of the Mirror
Death; Grief; Alternate Worlds

A woman finds herself in the unfortunate circumstance of having her life utterly shattered by a young college student who was driving while texting. Because of the accident she: lost her wife; lost her baby; gained hallucinations.

One of the hallucinations is associated with a hated mirror - but one that had also been beloved by her wife - so she can't get rid of it.

Rating: 4.89

March 12 2017

D. Jackson Leigh: Skin Walkers
Skinwalkers; Natives

A professor has gained certain fame as a myth-buster - best-selling book; grant money; etc. She has been hired to try to figure out what is going on with a 'gathering of wild horses' event conducted by the government.

Another 'more than meets the eye'; and another 'lives entertwinned through more than one moment alive'.

Rating: 3.89

March 12 2017

Rebecca S. Buck: Forget Me Not
Historical Fiction (1890), (view spoiler)

A woman wanders she knows where not, for she's distracted by 'needing to breath' and eventually drunk. She winds up hiding in a church graveyard when she hears a voice. Telling her 'you are like me'. She has a conversation with that woman that goes along with the voice.

There's this hypnotic pull to the story that I'm not sure I'd feel any other time, so my feelings for the story and my rating are probably slightly dislodged from the norm.

Rating: 4.69

March 12 2017

Nell Stark and Trinity Tam: The Others
Werecheetah, shifters, vampires, BDSM, undercover

A side story to the Stark & Tam series - as in it follows two side characters instead of the main characters in the series. Judging by copyright dates, and the actions in this here story, this is probably something like a 3.5 story. And instead of starring Valentine Darrow & Alexa Newland, it stars Olivia (human) and Abby (werecheeteh). Well, more stars Olivia.

Story shows Olivia going undercover to try to 'take down' a presidential candidate. Goes to that fight club that appears in the Everafter series. If any other characters from that series pops up, I didn't recognize them.

For what it is - interesting snippet that I want to see concluded, see more of. And I have a vague recollection that while 'something' turns up in book four that is vaguely connected, the story line itself - with Olivia 'doing stuff' didn't really go anywhere in book 4. But I can't really go by memory - right or wrong memory, but what's going on in this here story. And, for what it's worth, I'd give this somewhat incomplete story a rating of 3.78.

Rating: 3.78

March 13 2017

Ronica Black: Emily
Horror; Psychological; Psychologist

A messed up young woman does evil things so that she can 'see Emily' again. Unleashes bad stuff. Sees psychologist. May or may not rape herself, depending on how you interpret the story.

Rating: 3.50

March 13 2017

Rebekah Weatherspoon: Study Break
Vampires, college students, dominance/submission, rape (at best I could call it 'dubious consent', though I'm not sure I could go so far as to call it 'consent while unable to actually be of sound mind to give consent' since consent wasn't given - more lack of any kind of safe word (if such a thing exists in their relationship, fuck, this is supposed to be my genre/tags section, not me writing shit section).

I've liked everything I've read by Weatherspoon, but know/knew that 90% of what she puts out were the kind of thing I didn't want to read. Like that vampire series. I assume that this short story here is somehow connected to that series (sorority, vampires, d/s), but no idea how connected. Nor do I care.

I knew I wouldn't want anything to do with that series, but because this short story was in a book I already owned, and because I've liked everything I have in fact read by Weatherspoon, I figured I'd go ahead and read this very short story.

And now I feel ill.

I do not like mixing dominance/submission games with paranormal creatures (which themselves have 'erotic' features associated with them - like here wherein being feed upon by a vampire causes instant and multiple orgasms).

I assume I would understand the story more if I had read at least the first vampire book. As is - it is confusing. The main character's father is the ultimate demon? Something like that? Yet she is human? And has been given by him to his 'most powerful' . . . something. Subordinate? Who happens to be a vampire. Who feeds on her. And one other (at least) - people who have been 'trained' to be feed upon. Apparently 'allowing a creature to bite you and suck on your blood while you experience multiple orgasms' is something that you need to be trained for.

Meanwhile the main character, a freshman, has apparently found a junior to be her 'mistress' who 'controls' Benny as 'Bunny', her pet bunny.

Benny is quite shy and doesn't want to have anyone there when she is feed upon, and doesn't want to be there when her mistress is feed upon. But she doesn't get a choice. Because. You know, Mistress and shit. Then, after being forced to watch, she's basically raped by the Mistress (the concept of consent flew out the window before this story evern began - really, the father gave her to a vampire? Fuck that. And fuck this series; then, by her own choice, she 'takes on' a Mistress, a human, who has her do things that blow far past her limits, then fucks her when her limits are blown and she is not of sound mind to consent or not consent, hence my 'rape' comment above - and my 'I don't like mixing dominance/submission with paranormal creatures' comment - too much fucking 'magical compulsion' floating around to keep anyone sane).

ETA: same sorority, I believe, different characters. Though 'Ginger' mentioned but not seen in the story here might be dating the vampire in this story - and Ginger is the main character in the first book. Ah - Cleo and Benny of this short story star in book two of the series, so this is something like 1.5 in that series.

Rating: 0.75

March 10 2017

Lesley Davis: Away with the Fairies
Vampires, Werewolves, Shifters, Fae, Tavern

This is the story wherein I decided to go back to the beginning of the review and add that 'things are not what they seem'. For here we have yet another 'things are not what they seem.' And it is also one of those where humans do not factor. Everyone in it is a vampire, werewolf, or fairy (as in the fae kind). There's a bit of misdirect, though, that allows that 'things' line to be stated yet again.

There's this tavern, see, which is on something like neutral ground. Three factions can and do meet there - though mostly the werewolves and the vampires visit. There's a reason the fae tend not to do so - and it is indirectly revealed in the story.

The werewolves and vampires are the more aggressive of the three, though it is currently mostly a time of peace. Though news of a possible invasion surfaces. So the fae visit the tavern.

Good interesting solid story.

Rating: 3.77

March 13 2017

M.J. Williamz: In the Bell Tower
New Orleans, Vampire, Erotica

A woman from Spokane visits New Orleans. And a vampire drops onto her. They hump. The end.

Rating: 3.63

March 13 2017

Sheri Lewis Wohl: Bloodstone
Magic; Parallel worlds; wizards

A woman finds out she wasn't actually born in New Haven CT, but on some other planet. And her parents guarded against the rising of an evil wizard like dude. And now she's in danger and has to fight evil wizard like dude.

A story with a strong feeling of being a full story - beginning middle end. Even prologue. With touches indicating it is connected to some wider universe/series. Still, 'only' a 3.83 or so story.

Rating: 3.83

March 13 2017

L.T. Marie: Plagued by Darkness
Blind; Vampire

Would have been close to 5 stars if it hadn't ended abruptly. Seemingly mid=story.

Rating: 4.29

March 13 2017

Joey Bass: Recyclables
Professor; Police; Vampires; Mystery

Would have been close to 5 stars if it hadn't ended abruptly. Seemingly mid=story.

Rating: 4.29

March 13 2017

Shelley Thrasher: The Orient Express
Travel; Vampires?; Europe

A woman takes a ride on the Orient Express some time while the Vietnam War was in progress.

She fantasies about all the people around her while she rides along.

Then an event occurs while she attempts to sleep that may or may not have happened. Though it left visible scars in the morning.

Rating: 3.99

March 13 2017

Winter Pennington: Eris
Vampire; Fae; BDSM

A vampire that feeds on lust and sex and the like beats up a woman who just wants to be touched. Then fucks a fairy.

This story is connected to that Kassandra PI series.

Rating: 3.00

March 13 2017

Yolanda Wallace: Blood Moon
Vampires, Vampire hunter, Savannah Georgia, Halloween

A vampire hunter, who immediately lets you know she's no Buffy (scrawny thing - Buffy), nor a Bella type. No, she's a cold blooded killing machine of vampires.

It's Halloween in Savannah and she goes hunting.

Rating: 3.63

March 10 2017

Mel Bossa: Contrition
Mental Illness

A mentally ill woman masturbates while reliving her time [with] (view spoiler) her (view spoiler) girlfriend.

I was being somewhat flippant because I didn't know why the story was in the book.

And, did you know there's a character limit to reviews? I ran out of characters. See below.

Rating: 0.01

March 13 2017

L.L. Raand: Deadly Glamour

Another story which appeared solid until ending abruptly and therefore losing major rating point.

A fairy princess, heir to the throne, has done a runner. A hunter is sent out to retrieve her.

Rating: 3.62

March 14 2017

Clara Nipper: Fresh Meat
Roller Derby, obsession, sex, nurse

A nurse patches up a woman who is badly bruised. The nurse assumes that the woman is an abuse victim and tries to help. Become bitchy when the woman refuses help. Turns out that woman wasn't abused - she got the injuries from roller derby.

Nurse develops this odd obsession for roller derby. Specifically the team that woman was from. Though she's not specifically interested in that woman.

A story that annoyed me - to a certain extent. That obsession with roller derby. The way that woman was acting - the way others in the story were acting. Then sex occurred and my brain imploded. So, whatever.

Rating: 4.78

March 10 2017

Overall
Merry Shannon: Lucky Number Seven: 4.34
Sam Cameron: Come to Me: 3.30
Meghan O'Brien: Full Moon Weekend: 3.75
Jane Fletcher: Tempora Mutantur: 4.99
Jess Faraday: The Trickster Codex: 3.79
Victoria Oldham: For all Eternity: 2.15
Karis Walsh: Solstice: 4.25
Valerie Bronwen: The Other Side of the Mirror: 4.79
D. Jackson Leigh: Skin Walkers: 3.89
Rebecca S. Buck: Forget Me Not: 4.69
Nell Stark and Trinity Tam: The Others: 3.78
Ronica Black: Emily: 3.50
Rebekah Weatherspoon: Study Break: 0.75
Lesley Davis: Away with the Fairies: 3.77
M.J. Williamz: In the Bell Tower: 3.63
Sheri Lewis Wohl: Bloodstone: 3.83
L.T. Marie: Plagued by Darkness: 4.29
Joey Bass: Recyclables: 4.29
Shelley Thrasher: The Orient Express: 3.99
Winter Pennington: Eris: 3.00
Yolanda Wallace: Blood Moon: 3.63
Mel Bossa: Contrition: 0.01
L.L. Raand: Deadly Glamour: 3.62
Clara Nipper: Fresh Meat: 4.78
Overall Rating: --------------- 3.77435



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Thursday, March 9, 2017

The "Volunteer" by D.H. Jonathan


Somewhat disturbing book on several levels. From my notes as I read:

44% - "Woman being forced to wander campus naked for 2 months. One of her professors tries to take advantage, rape almost happens. She is saved. The professor forcing her to be naked then, after saving her, hugs her without permission. Then one of the helpers, 'an attractive man', kisses her without permission (though slowly and tentatively). Which part of this is ok/not ok? forced nudity? almost rape? hug, kiss?"

67% - "Definite vibe of force/dubious consent/etc. - especially when the things the 'forced to be naked woman' chooses to do on her own initiative, be a nude model for an art class, gets a one liner ('did modeling, got two more gigs from the guy'); while the force stuff, for the most part, gets a lot more than one liners.

And seriously? Just . . .breaking into a student's room and sitting on her bed? Dr. Slater is evil."

I've several problems with the book, some noted above. In addition to whatever can be pulled from there:
1) Every step of the way the main character was pushed into doing things out of her control and against her will, sure there were 'okay, you don't have to do it but if you don't you will be kicked out of school and . . . stuff';
2) Things were built in to make 'stuff' more creepy - like how the professor behind the experiment didn't want just anyone (which, apparently, includes real volunteers since they would be the kind of woman (or man) who 'wanted' to do that kind of thing (or have been willing) because . . . . um . . because she's a twisted freak? And the other professor who almost raped her; and the PR person who kept pushing and pushing her into situations the MC didn't want to be in; or the vaguely (and somewhat less so) creepy roommate who kept dragging her boyfriend around to see her 'naked roommate'; to . . . well, even the parents were creepy in their way and no I don't mean the part where they 'just didn't understand' or 'freaked out', I mean they way they went behind her back and purposefully or accidentally made their own daughter out as a liar and fraud (when they attempted to get the professor and school/dean in trouble - mind you they waited several months - until it everything was all over, before they did this stunt) by pointing out . . . well, the truth behind what occurred - that their daughter wasn't in fact making some grand point about nudity and body image and crap like that, but had, instead, been blackmailed into being naked - nationally); to the friends back home who force her to be naked around them - including the part wherein one friend almost got her arrested.
3) WTF is up with that ending? I've partially noted what occurred above but - super creepy professor who was forcing MC to do what she was doing, and at times 'broke into' the girl's room and sat on her bed and strongly encouraged her to do stuff (no, not sexual - continue being naked in public) - 'helped' the MC when she was almost raped and blackmailed that other professor to give the MC a good grade - and later telling the MC that 'he'd be dealt with after the semester is over'. That rapey-professor? Apparently was either forgotten by the time the semester ended, or had no problems associated with his actions - legal or otherwise. At least, nothing was mentioned at the end of the book. No, it was the dean, the creepy 'force blackmailed girl to be naked' professor, and the PR person who got into trouble - and . . . the MC stood up for the creepy professor (at least in the sense that her actions could be construed to help that professor stay on campus - she, in her way, hated the professor and her actions, but . . . um . . . film of her naked was already school property and . . . um . . . the MC . . . preferred the creepy professor to handle it? Something like that? Course, creepy-mccreep then turned around and sold the footage to a film company so . . . MC was stupid. Or something.




Tuesday, March 7, 2017

Death Goes Overboard by David S. Pederson



Death Goes Overboard
by David S. Pederson
Pages: ?
Date: April 1 2017
Publisher: Bold Strokes Books
Series: Detective Heath Barrington Mystery (2nd in series)

Review
Rating: 3.65 to 3.85
Read: March 3-4 2017

*I received this book from NetGalley, and Bold Strokes Books in return for a fair review.*

Like the prior book in this series, and as expected, this book here stars Detective Heath Barrington of the Milwaukee Police Department. Unlike the prior book in this series, some part of the police work in this book actually occurs in Milwaukee. Though, despite jurisdiction issues, some of it also occurs outside Milwaukee’s city borders – like on a boat on one of the Great Lakes (Lake Michigan).

There are several plot lines but two main ones of importance: 1) Everyone, including literally an aunt, let Heath know that being a single man of his age is super risky and leads to talk of a certain nature (like, say, ‘it’s obvious that he is gay’; there’s an additional ‘especially the way he is so neat and how he dresses’ but I’ll let that pass) – as in: being a gay man in post WWII America is difficult and certain things are needed to be done to cover that up which can lead to a bunch of lying, deception, and the like (to be fair – without some level of lying, a gay man will find themselves out of work (at least with the police, and possibly in a mental institution somewhere getting electric shocks to their balls); 2) police work occurs.

Heath continues to date Officer Alan Keyes, though is having two issues in regards to that – 1) both are men and it is 1947; 2) does he actually want a steady relationship with anyone? That plot-line is followed throughout the book. Of major importance in the book. Regarding that ‘gay issue’, I have two things that came to mind while reading this book – 1) Heath seemed a lot more naïve than I would have expected for a man of his ‘advanced’ age (his exact age might have been given at some point, though he is somewhere in his 30s, and some comments would lead one to suspect him to be in the latter half of his thirties; the concept of a beard, of marrying a woman and having fun with men – with or without the wives knowledge, was something Heath never realized could happen; also something he had never heard of was a lavender marriage – gay man, lesbian woman, marry as each other’s ‘cover’ – granted, the first time I saw reference to that type of arrangement was in Ann Bannon’s book of the 1950s/60s – and I doubt she came up with the idea completely on her own (Bannon had both types of marriages in her series) and yes, I know 1959 is not 1947, and Heath seemed so naïve regarding gay issues, that I doubt he read gay fiction, much less lesbian pulp); 2) he and another gay man in the book seem to fall into a particular gay stereotype I didn’t expect to see – both him and Riker (another police officer in the book, more on him later), seem to be rather ‘causal’ about sex – more so Riker (Heath is more tempted by the idea and keeps being inches from falling into that type of lifestyle) – as in, all the sex they can get, with men, as much as they can get, regardless of the man or the circumstances (it was so much of a gay stereotype that I actually began to believe that Riker was actually bait – either from some higher ups in the police force trying to trick/trap Heath; or someone Alan Keyes got to ‘check on’ Heath since Heath was acting a little ‘pulling-away-ish’). So that story line flows through the book as well – that ‘should Heath, while eyeballing every man around him as a sexual object, decide that Alan is really ‘his’? Should Heath get a ‘beard’, get himself into a marriage? *proceeds to eyeball every woman around him as a means to an end – marriage cover*.

The other major plot being followed is a different type of mystery (what, there’s a kind of mystery involved in ‘will Heath chose some woman to marry? Stay with Alan? Stray?’). Gregor Slavinsky is taking a great lake cruise – and he is being followed by a man named Ballentine and his lackey George. Slavinsky has been in and out of prison – and has just recently gotten out. And has secured $25,000 of Ballentine’s money as a loan. And Slavinsky is beginning to miss payments. Not something criminals like to hear.

The police have wanted to ‘get’ Ballentine for a while now and believe that this is a perfect opportunity to catch him doing something illegal. So Heath is sent undercover on the Great Lake voyage as an insurance man. A new-to-the-series officer also is undercover as a steward – that would be the previously mentioned Riker.

There is a mystery, and plot A does lead to b, c, d, and the police are shown to use their brains to follow along. With the introduction of certain elements, I immediately knew ‘something’ was occurring, though it took a body going over the side of the boat for me to ‘know’ what was going on. And, while it took the rest of the book for the characters to catch up, I was correct. Mind you, despite that last sentence, the cops weren’t made to look too inexperienced/naïve/stupid – they followed logically along, including a few wrong guesses (real life isn’t ‘Cop: x occurred, didn’t it? Criminal: how did you know!!!’). I did have a problem with one element, maybe minor, maybe not important, but . . . well. As can occur in mystery novels – there comes the time when the brilliant detective reveals the plot points, or I mean, how he figured it out. One slight issue I had here is that the author went one step too far. He had his detective ‘know’ and ‘reveal’ why that whiskey bottle was in the cabin. But, while there is a logical explanation, and while he can logically come to the conclusion that ‘this’ is the reason for the whiskey bottle, he can’t ‘know’ that this is the reason – for everyone who could confirm the matter is dead – died before he put the facts together. Hence my ‘one step too far’ – one step too far in trying to make the police detective look brilliant. Now, all that needs to happen is a few word changes. Something like ‘it is likely that’ instead of ‘it was there because’. Semantics. Logically the steps, pieces, were laid for that specific clue to be found – except for the part where it had to remain speculation (’I also thought the bottle of whiskey in Gregor’s cabin was strange, as he drank martinis. [X] was the one who liked whiskey, but of course [x] didn’t’ want to risk [y] finding [x]’s bottle and getting smashed, so [x] kept it in Gregor’s cabin and used the connecting door . . . .’ - lot of speculation going on in that ‘reveal everything’ being treated as fact .

The time on the ship was quite interesting, the mystery, despite several things I’ve stated, was also well enough crafted (a little heavy handed, but well enough crafted). The wandering eye is a character issue, not exactly one I wished to read, but feasible. As is those several talks about marriage (lavender or not). Overall a good book. I liked the first book more than the second, but second was good enough.

Rating: 3.65 to 3.85

March 6 2017

At Last by Lynn Galli

At LastAt Last by Lynn Galli

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Quick thoughts:
1) re: ‘Learn how the Virginia Clan came to be and watch as Willa and Quinn settle into their new life together.’ & re: ‘Virginia Clan Book 0’ – This is a book that covers something like 12 and a half years and not all of that time is shown, some is leapt over. And while a big chunk of time that is skipped is from the end of the book to the epilogue section, not all of that missing time occurs in that in-between section (no, that’s only 7 of the years). The book starts before the Virginia Clan series, proceeds through the years those books occur, and then ends afterwards.

a) That sentence I quoted above, the ‘Learn how the Virginia Clan came to be and watch as Willa and Quinn settle into their new life together’ is very misleading. You, the reader, do not actually ‘get to learn’ anything (that's putting it strongly, certain things are learned, like how Jessie and two others were friends of Quinn's, and Willa got pulled into their circle (though that's something tossed out years after the joining of Willa into the circle)). While the book starts before the clan got together, one of the ‘leap forwards’ occurs in such a way that the clan is already formed once the ‘leaping forward in time’ ends. I’m not actually sure who all is considered part of the Clan. Some have their own books, but some don’t. To a certain extent, one of the things I was looking forward to seeing, one of the interesting aspects of that could have been here, if the book had actually included a 'learning about the formation', would have been finding out why those two really rough and disagreeable people, who no one likes, joined the group – especially since they don’t a have a book of their own. I mean, most of these people are deliberately ‘misseen’ by the group. They probably are as well.
- Jessie the player who might not be
- Willa the robot, but isn’t
- M who can’t string two words together and is very quiet – unless you take one of her classes, or one of the two people she is closest to
- Etc. etc.
- Des the rough bitchy type who . . . what? Is really a rough bitchy type? Is actually a cuddly bear? Is actually even ‘worse’ than a rough bitchy type? We will never know.

b) While it is true that this book starts before the first book in the series, it is also try that it ends after the last, current, book in the series. And therefore certain information will be revealed that those who have not read this series and do not desire to be ‘spoiled’ should not read. Mostly in the epilogue section, but things dribble out here and there elsewhere in the book.

2) Sex both occurs and is graphically described. Feelings occurred and stuff.

To reiterate: while the description makes this book appear to be a prequel, it isn’t really. You don’t actually see the formation of the ‘Virginia Clan’, and you learn stuff that is ‘spoiler-y’ for some of the other books in the series. This is better read after the other books have been read.

Oh, and it is also an expanded version of ‘Finally’ in that ‘Finally’ short story collection. Though that’s stated up front in the book. And I’ve not read that Finally book so I can’t really comment on that aspect. Also – I’m glad now that I hadn’t read that book, because two of the stories have been expanded to full length books now (this book and Out of Order), so I’m happy to be able to experience them fresh.

Rating: 3.67

March 7 2017



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Monday, March 6, 2017

A Kiss Doesn't Lie by Robin Alexander

A Kiss Doesn't LieA Kiss Doesn't Lie by Robin Alexander

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


This is both one of the better lesbian action/adventure/discovery books I've read and competently written. I do not believe it ranks up there with the best books put out by Alexander, though. Not sure if I'd give a rating of 3.5 or 3.75. I edge to 3.75 because of that 'one of the better' thingies I said above.

Rating: 3.5 to 3.75





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