Friday, January 9, 2015

Cassie's Conundrum by Eric Stray


Cassie's Conundrum
by Eric Stray
Pages: 29
Date: September 21 2014
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 1.0 out of 5.0
Read: January 9 2015

Hmms. So . . .. Randomly stumbling around Kindle Unlimited stories. Spot this one. Check it out. And . . . a girl gets turned into a dog? And can't reach orgasm except under certain circumstances? And is drooling over dogs and what dogs might do to her?

Eek.  This crossed the line, it did.   And while mind-control/brainwashing and the like seems . . . possible, the reaction of the pet store was quite odd.  Unbelievable.

Actually the whole thing leans way too far into unbelievablity land.  Reads too much like an all powerful author getting himself off rather than a story with credible characters. Don't need to be fully formed, just something more than puppets to push around while squealing.

Ah. And another "Master" asking someone too out of it to understand or give consent, if they wish to "continue".  Too out of it in a constantly horny, can't stop rubbing themselves and moaning like a puppy in heat while barely keeping their clothes on, and sometimes forgetting to do so.  That out of it.

Adding fake little "she gave consent" scenes like that annoy me.  Then again, whatever her decision turned out to be is left up to the reader.

A woman is dominated by a story author. She calls him Master, which is why I got the idea that it's a "him", or man.  The LGBT tag is used because of her actions in the pet store.  I guess that would make her at least bisexual? hmms. Don't care.

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