Cinderella Bared: An Erotic Fairy Tale Adventure by Colleen Chen

Cinderella Bared: An Erotic Fairy Tale Adventure
by Colleen Chen
Pages: 139
Date: February 14 2015
Publisher: Hot Pink Books

Review
Rating: 4.0 out of 5.0
Read: April 18 2015

Appears to be two diverging paths at the beginning with their own paths that branch off of them. One involves staying and doing chores at home. Other involves doing a chore that takes you outside.

The outside path appears to have two paths to follow. One path lead to an old woman/witch. Interesting enough but felt detached for the events. Another path lead to an exciting ride on a horse while being fingered and then finding a gorgeous woman in a box and pleasuring her awake. Fun. heh.

Inside path almost immediately has you humping a broom. Then a knock at the door with a solider. Who you play with. Quite exciting. The pathways that branch off from staying to do the inside chore are also interesting and exciting.

Actually, the only one that wasn't "exciting" was the first one I read with the old woman.

Correction. I decided to look at some of the other branching paths. There's one where you end up pleasuring your step-sister. Leave and head to the other. I don't like how you arrive there as if the prior scene never occurred. Or, to put another way, it's the same page you would turn to if you had snuck away instead of stayed to pleasure the step-sister. mmphs.

Your Point of View Fantasy 4 - Your Lesbian First Time (Your Point of View Fantasy #4) by Amanda Clover

Your Point of View Fantasy 4 - Your Lesbian First Time (Your Point of View Fantasy #4)
by Amanda Clover
Pages: 42
Date: February 14 2015
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 2.0 out of 5.0
Read: April 17 2015

hmms. I keep alternating from liking and disliking the stuff this author writes. First thing I read I gave 2 stars. Second thing I gave 5. Third, this story here, I gave 2.

Bah. I don't know. It might be the you thing. How the story is intended to use "you" to work the reader into the story. Problem is that I don't see myself at all in the lead character. 19 and obsessed with ass. With licking ass. I don't even remember 19 and the entire idea of being fixated on that area of the body somewhat removes me from erotic desires of all kinds. And so . . .. Oh, and then there's the student/teacher thing that was icky.

So, yeah. This be icky story.

Heart of Montana by C.K. Alexander

Heart of Montana
by C.K. Alexander
Pages: 74
Date: June 4 2013
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 3.0 out of 5.0
Read: April 9 2015

This is something like the second or third gay erotic book that I have attempted, going in knowing that it was a gay erotic book. I read it to read the requirements of a challenge, specifically to read books with erotic themes from the fifty states. Montana hadn't been covered, yet, so I looked around and felt adventurous enough to attempt another gay erotic book. I’m going in on the story while knowing that I normally do not find romances between two men to be, personally to me, that enjoyable.

So . . .. A newly minted doctor has a massive education debt to repay. Looks around. Spots a job over in rural Montana which will greatly help him pay much off his debt. So, mostly sight unseen, he accepts the job, finds a place to live while there, and then packs up to move. The short book opens with the good doctor packing up in New England. Ready for his trip to Montana.

Somewhat randomly, like throwing darts randomly, he buys a pick-up truck. Whereupon he almost promptly gets a flat tire. While trying to figure out how to fix it, a park ranger pulls up and offers to help. So, the damsel in distress in this situation is a dude. Being helped by another dude. Both of whom thinks that the other is quite handsome. It's interesting and somewhat refreshing to see both that the person in distress isn't a woman, like it almost always seems to be, and that the man in trouble is willing to accept help. This almost never seems to be the case.

So, there's one potential love interest meet almost immediately. The half-Cheyenne park ranger. Who isn't out as being gay. Later Dr. Adrian Cook, the doctor guy who I haven't actually named yet, gets to his new place of employment. Meets up with his boss. Another guy who appears to be quite attractive and is giving off gay vibrations. Another potential love interest, and another one who isn't out about who he is. There's mention of a lesbian worker at the hospital, not meet in the story, and a gay nurse, meet but much later. So, this small town of 5,162 in Montana has a lot of gay people.

So, the romance between Dr. Cook and Randall Banks, the park ranger, progressed nicely. With fishing and stuff. Then immediately hits a snag when Dr. Cook decides to go for a jog when the park ranger heads off to work. Only to spot said park ranger with his head bouncing up and down over another man in a car off the hiking trail. And so . . ..

There's an interesting bit of love triangle, blackmail, humans being humans, and the like going on. I like how one of the characters is out and out bisexual. The idea that such a critter can exist. Of course, in this specific situation, that little bit of detail causes a great deal of trouble.

Well, I'll depart with this thought: There's a good story here. Good character build up, and some interesting side stories, but . . . all the buildup kind of built up to . . . everything being wrapped up in a few words instead of actually writing what happened. Docked a star or half for that. Probably half star.