Showing posts with label Auction. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Auction. Show all posts
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale by Felicia Montoya
Peaches & Cream: a Ponygirl tale
by Felicia Montoya
Pages: 55
Date: August 19 2015
Publisher: Author
Review
Rating: 5.0 out of 5.0
Read: October 17 2015
My first read by this author. And likely I might have put off longer but for the readathon I was doing. Since it was available. And I wanted something to read.
Ooh neat, an auction. Katie Trammel, now known as "Peaches", is the main character. And is in a ponygirl auction, as a ponygirl. When the story opens. Another ponygirl short story that starts with the main character already in ponygirl stuff. Now to see if this one also will fall back to the old classic of 'flashback: this is how I got here'.
Adding to the humiliation of standing there with 'my boobs out and my shave pussy on display, potential buyers pawing me, seeing how I moisten when their fingers probe my two lower holes' is the addition of 'the lezzie-bitch from college' - Veronica. Hmms. Veronica seems like she might be fun. I hope she wins Peaches. *nods, drools*
Well, that's different. Started a story. Read story. Looked and . . whoa, it was at 100%! A full load! That makes me happy. *nods*
Oh. I just realized I forgot to write anything between drooling and the end. I kind of fell into a trance. It was a fun story, it was. Quite fun.
Tuesday, November 26, 2013
Her Troika: Part I by Trent Evans
Her Troika: Part I
by Trent Evans
Pages: 53
Date: May 21 2013
Publisher: Tritium Press
Review
Rating: 2 out of 5
Read: November 26 2013
The prologue suggested ponygirl stuff. A little too detached from the action but pulled in. Then story, at least part 1, had nothing to do about that. Instead it turned into an auction story. Interesting enough idea, so I read.
The action seemed to detached. 'Stuff' happening in prologue, but more hinted at than anything else. Then the actual story started. Was interesting, quite. Action out of sight, but intriguing. But what ever excitement that could have been had seemed leached away by a newcomer to the scene who kept making loud comments to his friend.
Bah. I don't like Derek from this small slice, and not really like the husband character either. Their were some intriguing characters, like the CEO and wife, but they barely had part in this slice.
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