Porcelain A BDSM Story by Jericho C. Hale

Porcelain A BDSM Story
by Jericho C. Hale
Pages: 13
Published Date: April 5 2014
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 2.0 out of 5.0
Read: April 6 2014

After a twenty year marriage a husband finds his wife cheating on him. He decides to leave. She begs him not to leave.  For Gina (their kid).  He's angry. She's begging. He tells her that she will obey him in all matters because he doesn't trust her. If she fails, he will leave and in a few years tell their daughter why.  She agrees to obey him.

An angry little story filled with angry sex.  He's a mixture of turned on and enraged. She's a mixture of turned on and ashamed/disgusted. He fucks her a lot.  Angrily.  End story.

I found the story on Smashwords. Hadn't played on there before.  Found that I could search for BDSM stories and, coincidence, I had a BDSM challenge over on GoodReads.  This story was the first one on the BDSM list of free stories.  Newest upload.

I'm not exactly sure how, though, this fits into BDSM. There's domination and submission, but twisted. He doesn't really want to dominate her, and she doesn't really want to submit. There's rough sex, but rough sex in and of itself doesn't equal BDSM.

I don't know what to say.  Ok-ish story. Didn't arouse much in the way of interest from me. I read it more because it was there than because I thought I might like it. Writer was competent, but competent in writing about something I didn't really want to read.  The consequences of a cheating wife. Angry and betrayal. Begging and submission. Not really that interesting to me.