Sandra Smiles by B.J. Slippy

Sandra Smiles
by B.J. Slippy
Pages: 20
Date: March 10 2014
Publisher: Author

Review
Rating: 4.25 out of 5.0
Read: May 25 2015


First half (or maybe 40%) was kind of slow. Getting a rough vague idea of the main character. And first date that just involved meeting in a park. Then things picked up. Erotica-wise. hmms. Picked up in terms of eroticism.

Ah. Good. Drama. See, this is like a typical romantic comedy movie. Must add weird tension in the form of misunderstandings and slightly wrong word choices. I'm being slightly sacastic if that isn't clear.

In this case, after "going down" (no idea why I'm putting quotes on that), the blind woman tells the fat one that she doesn't have to go down on her. The fat one (what, the fat one's size, and the blind one's blindness are important to the story . . . fine) . . .. After Sandra goes down on Missy, pushes her to climax, she adjusts herself and sits on the sofa next to her. Causally commenting that Missy didn't need to return the favor. She just wanted to make sure that . . . right, I didn't really get it, but meh. She wanted to make sure her guest had fun with the blind women, basically. Missy misinterpreted that to mean tat Sandra was pitying her for being fat. Or something. And storms out. See, tension and drama.

Cute story. The overall story was interesting. The graphic sections read a little mechanically. Just a little. At times. At other times not.

Ended a little . . . well, not abruptly. hmms. Ended quickly? Bah. It was a short story. It had a discernable beginning, middle, and a . . . um, something of an ending. I suppose it says something that I want to know more. To follow more of their story. I suspect that isn't going to happen. Oh well.